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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Alrighty then, first things first. I like the humour in this flash and it makes me think that this came right out of an official video game and I like that a lot.
I was also impressed with the movement in the sprites, it made it feel fast paced.
The only thing that kind of bothered me (and this is me being nit picky) was the fuzzy background, hence the 3.5 stars.
Overall, I think you did a bang up job and I see a lot of potential in you!
Keep up the good work!
The vision bugged me, I know she is running and everything but it felt blurry, plus when you move the ground to make it seem like she was running you needed to have the background moving a bit.
I wouldn't call this too much original since the entire game of sonic is jumping around hitting stuff but it was still nice
You did very well, I really liked how you made it and as a matter of fact I guess I could use some tips from you when it comes to animating.
Don't know whats impact so I just tossed you 2.5 stars on that, Just to make it even.
You got potential man, Keep it up.
Yours truly: Coconut.
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